Just wanted to see what your thoughts were, and go from there. Thanks in advance.

I think it looks very decent. A couple of major games off the top of my head that have similar title styles are Skyrim and Guild Wars 2, and I can see it fitting right in with them.

Thanks, i didnt have anything in mind in general other than the sci-fi white/grey look... although the game is medival so I added the clouds to bring in a grain effect. I am debating on adding in some particles that would spawn from the lower left and float up like fire spakrs to the center.

looks realy nice
but are you going to add any more text ??

Yes, there would be the menu text on the left, and the currently selected character will be on the right. Again, more or less a test demo to get the reactions of people and see if it is too generic or.. if it is just right.

cut be nice to see it with just the menu text

Reminds me of the Assassin's Creed title screen.

Added the particles ( what they should look like ) as well as a demo of the character.

Looks cool.

looks very clean and the particles should be awesome in movement.
Only 1 comment, not sure if it's intended but the depth seems to be missing from the clouds.