Here's one of my first songs that I actually polished, even though it isn't quite finished yet. I made it using a MIDI program, then converting it to MP3 and smoothing it and applying filters. Here's the link Clicky Please go easy on me, first song I've shown to the public.

GeoCities hates you. You should look into hosting your mp3s elsewhere, as you will probably exceed your transfer limit.

working now, not bad. I think that you should make the high 2 notes of the triplets quieter, and the others lowder. Also the other noises (whole notes?) should be lowder, and at least on my computer they wern't very balanced between the speakers, are you panning them? if so, don't go all the way, it's hard to keep track of them.
Nice tune though, would work great in an rpg of some sort.

You're right about GeoCities.

No, it isn't panning, the reason it sounds so weird is because I applied a Phaser filter to it (Audacity) after I recorded it, and then put the original one in the background, then put the phaser'd one on the left, copied it, and applied a WahWah filter to the other channel (a copy of the left one).

They balance fine on my computer, and on every other computer that I've seen.