Hey
Wow, so, I really like this peace, gave me goosebumps. Thank you so much, I always enjoy great music. It's a really strong, emotional piece.
I think, I agree with the general consensus, here. But I'll try to answer your question from different perspectives. Forgive me, I'm about to go a bit crazy here
From the beginning, it has a somewhat unsettling quality. And it speaks of pain, maybe due to prior losses. I also hear some readiness, forced by a certain unavoidability. Yet still, there is an underlying sacredness to it that reminds me of hope and love.
A sense of like you know, you're fighting for the greater good. You will have to face the darker forces alongside with your own fear, you'll have to do this. You don't really want to but there's no way around. And, luckily, there's also no question, if it will be worth it. The greatest cause justifies it all. It'll be a tough one and the stakes are high. But the chances aren't that bad and if you can do it, it'll be the end of all the suffering that's been upon us for all those years.
If I were to compare it, I'd say, I can hear some influences from the darker tones of Howard Shore's the lord of the rings soundtrack (especially in the quieter parts at the beginning). I also feel reminded of John Murphey's adagio in g minor, in the later part when the strings give it their all.
Musically, you pulled off some neat little tricks, here. Especially the varying voicings are really great and lead the whole thing. At some point, they even feel like modulations, almost.
Just as an idea to add something constructive, here: In the stronger string part, you might wanna try adding little flute runs to lift it up even more. I think they would fit very nicely between the strings and the supporting piano.
Anyway, thanks again for sharing! It's really great work! So, please, do keep it up!
Have a good one