Blade Runner-ish city mood not working, could use some direction
In addition i miss fog and city density.
Your city looks sparse and still too bright, Bladerunner is dark, dense neverending city - no horizion, just more buildings everywhere.
(+1 for fog)
greenish haze which progressively covers far buildings
also rain, and reflections on wet streets
also, add more acid greens
look at this unrelated pics
an see what they all have in common
I agree with the previous posts.
Additionally,
- It's missing some texture \ chaos (graffiti, cracks, billboards etc.)
- The buildings on the background need lights too, else they look like a district under blackout.
- I would change the lighting in some parts, like the roofs. I would also use less smooth gradients, replacing for sharper zones, though I didn't do that in the image below as it would take too much time.
Abuse (DOS, 1995) had some cool grunge visuals:
Thanks for the feedback and pictures, very useful to non-artist myself :)