Hey Orymus3.
Thank you for open advise!
I am sure in all your wrote you are right for 99.9%.
And of course I will consider to make adjustments your are speaking about.
I will read you article and hope learn much.
I also understand you critical attitude to the fellow who climbed from nowhere.
This is normal. I was reacting in the same way almost for sure.
But what if my story not so ordinary as millions other stories you are speaking about?
Maybe it is special enough?
And what if I will be lucky to meet the right guy with different then me and you altitude?
Who will think, that 4 years which I spent to write the story and 1,5 years to prepare all worth 1 hour of his time?
Who will sign NDA and read the game story I will send to him?
If there is a 0.1% of it I want to take a time before continue and start all you mentioned alone.