Really don't want to make a big point out of this, sorry everyone! Just one last thing I'd like to say.
[...]Perhaps lack of variation in the snare rhythm would of been more valid.
I said: "[...] after a while it drags on because it keeps hammering out the same line. Maybe some more variation, to accompany the build up of the overall theme?"
Elsewhere you say: "It really is a matter of personal taste. You're acting like the way you would do things is the end all, when it's not."
I would like to say: That's not the way feedback works. Of course it's all a matter of personal taste, I've never denied that. Moreover, the way I would do things is irrelevant, because it's your piece, not mine. However, you're completely disregarding the connection between creator and audience. In this case you created something and asked what the audience thought of it. The audience replied, and you are provided with a different perspective - not a better or worse perspective, but a different one. It's completely irrelevant whether or not something is "personal taste"; it's about being open to different ways of listening to your own composition. I assumed you were interested in a different point of view, since you stated that feedback was welcome.
Now, if you would've said "I deliberately chose the snare drum to be like this because <reason>" or just "I really like the snare drum this way", then that would've been the end of the story. However, you said "changing things you pointed out wouldn't make a big difference". Here comes the audience (in this case me) saying: yes they would, otherwise I wouldn't have mentioned them. Of course you can disagree with my taste in feedback, but you are in fact disregarding the concept of feedback completely, so you'll never know whether or not it would've made a big difference. You haven't considered the idea.
Tl;dr: I'm trying to make the point that you're not open to suggestions at all, which in itself is fine, but don't ask for feedback then. If you're certain you're 100% happy with a composition, why would you want to post it on a music creation forum and ask for feedback in the first place? Just keep in mind that for every composition, there is a version of that same composition you'd be more content with somewhere in space and time.