Ok I just started my story called Atlantis: The forbidden scriptures. I drew the main character there is a picture in the link below ^_^. Feel free to leave any comments or constructive critisism. But I will soon be posting a website of all 170 characters, which i will keep posted on here. (It is under heavy construction). But keep checking www.geocities.com/jeffanddane. It should only take a week to scan all the characters and make the site look good ^_^. Also you will be able to see what I need help with as far as creation, landscapping, and story writting. All the positions will provide good exposure through my school at Expression college, you can also take a look at there web page on the link below ^_^. And also provide some not sure how much exposure to major video game companies. http://www.expression.edu/about_us/industry_relations/ ---The Schools Link http://new.photos.yahoo.com/jeffanddane/photo/294928804299501396/0 ---My Main char

I am not sure what you are asking. If you are looking for help, maybe the help wanted section would be best.
If you are looking for crits, what are you trying to improve?
Editing the posts to make the links clickable will help because most ppl won't get into the trouble of capy pasting your links. You just have to add the HTML code around your links.