Much better!

The echo on the snare for the whole song is a little out of place but the rebounding strokes on the snare is good for those places where the triplet sixteenths on the bass drum used to be. Not a major flaw but a little detail. (I used to be a drummer so I notice datails like this.)

The guitar is much better than the old one also.

I do notice the improvements here. I suggest you play bass underneath the song, that would sound very appropriate for this piece, and it just gives another depth to music. I'd have lots of fun doing improv with the bass. As for the snare, it reminds me of the gold drums soundfont in that it has a lot of reverb to it (I found the reverb to be too excessive). You should take out some reverb.

As for the slayers, they sound a bit too seperated in stereo. That perhaps works for this setup, with the drums sounding. But I still think it would sound better reworked.