I know this comes quickly after Blue Skies Always Bring Tommorow but I assure you im not done with it yet!. I am Currently Writing it and I should be able to post The story by Xmas...Kay? Okay Here is my new Idea: In the 23rd Centuary the Human Race is facing one of it''s biggest Crisis!, A test has concluded that the Human race is getting weaker and weaker in terms of Everything we do - Walk, Build, Learn...Everything!. It is decided that a new drug be developed to counteract this problem and Advance the Human race back to it''s former glory, After three years of hard work the new Drug known as ''Beta'' is compleated and is tested on a Man and Woman to see the effects. After two weeks in isolation the Subjects begin to grow stronger and Smarter and more Powerful than any human that ever lived!. The drug is then shipped worldwide to everyone aged 12-25 and slowly the world changes!, Riots and Protests develop saying that it is wrong to hand out this drug after only two weeks of testing and only three years in the making!. The Riots get worse and worse until the People who got the drug begin to feel more ''Powerful'' than they once thought, They gain Psycic Powers and They begine to use there inteligence to bild weapons of mass-destruction and unlimited pain. One of the ''Advanced'' claim that they are more powerful than gods and he decided to take this planet back in to the hands of it''s True Rulers!, Cities, Continents and Billions of lives are lost but Human kind begin to take action. Even though they cant fight them they can repel them as the Advanced can not go deeper that 2 miles underground, so Humans bild there new cities under the earth (Known as ''The Farms'') and begine to contemplate. After 4 Years they develop weapons that could stand a chance and Armor that almost repels their powers, The gear is given to a Elite group known as ''The Intertwiners'' and they are sent to the Surface to fight off a group of Advanced in a small village in france. Tell me what you think and send me Comments PLEASE!

Nice idea.

Just clarify why the advance can''t go underground?

Talib

I also think it''s a great plot. But I miss some argument or story why the superhumans start to develop weapons of mass destruction.


"They gain Psycic Powers and They begine to use there inteligence to bild weapons of mass-destruction and unlimited pain"

I mean, why? Are the drug making them extra evil and nasty or something?

One more thing doesn''t seem realistic.

"After 4 Years they develop weapons that could stand a chance and Armor that almost repels their powers,"

If the superhumans was superiour in mind, and are rulers of the earth instead of living in a hole, how come they haven''t made even stronger weapons?


Otherwise I really liked the story, a game with at story like that would really get me interested. I hope you finish the game!

Gatts: Over the last 8000 years or so, have you ever heard of people gaining superior powers over everyone else and NOT using them to further natural domineering and megalomanic fantasies?

Your Questions Answered:

Anonymous - It is because of a Safety feature just in case

Gatts - ''I mean, why? Are the drug making them extra evil and nasty or something?'' = Yes and No - Yes the drug stimulates the Need to fight over a period of time and No they are not evil but the One who claimed they were gods Was Advanced longer that the rest and he used his Powers to turn the Weaker Advanced to his side but there still are those who Oppose Humans and some who are nomad.

''If the superhumans was superiour in mind, and are rulers of the earth instead of living in a hole, how come they haven''t made even stronger weapons?'' - They only made short range weapons at first like Target Pistols and small arms but the game takes place when they are Perfecting a Weapon that will destroy Every ''Basic Human'' on the Planet.

Thank you all.
I hope i get more comments soon!
SOOOOOOOO EXCITED!

I hope you won''t take offense to this but... do you ever plan on making something of all the storylines you come up with? Such as a game or novel?

Okay RuneLancer I will explain.
I have to abandon a lot of my ideas cause i want to know what you guys think of them then if you like them i start to write them.
I am already Writing Blue Skies Always Bring Tommorow and have done the first Chapter but I like to keep comming up with ideas so i can keep writing.
So I ask you now...Please give me a honest rating!
PLEASE!

[edited by - CHASIS-BLADE on May 1, 2004 1:07:40 PM]

You know, some people thought, say, Xenogears was pure genius. Others thought it was pure crap.

I''ll let you draw your own conclusion. Hint: I''m talking about your ideas and people''s reactions to them, and that thing about not being able to please everyone.

Are you talking in code RuneLancer?
I do not understand what you mean!
Please Explain

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They begine to use there inteligence to bild weapons of mass-destruction and unlimited pain.

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Unlimited pain, I like that, sounds like a limit break from Final Fantasy or something Engrish.

Stay Clausal,

Red Sodium

[edited by - red_sodium on May 1, 2004 6:38:07 PM]