Could you give me opinions about my industrial song?
http://www.amol.wireland.org/Cyber Transmutation (demo).mp3
This is specific music, not very popular among music makers.
Please tell me what do you think about it. There are more songs by me at www.amol.wireland.org
Thanks,
aMoL
Maciej "aMoL" PawelczykThe Industrial Grinding Machine
I like it! It sounds like a great background track for some of the more modern style games out there. Would fit well into the movie scene as well as a fight song or such.
Only three thoughts on this one:
1) It''ll really only serve as background music, the song doesn''t have a melody or repeating theme to follow, so there''s little to tie it together. Though I''d also assume thats a style of music thing as much as anything else (I don''t listen to too much Industrial stuff)
2) I don''t like the loss of the kick at 00:11. The flange is a cool effect and it fits in well, but my subwoofer was just getting warmed up and you take it away
3) The entrances at 00:16 and 00:32 can be made much more intense by stopping all sound a beat before (with maybe a reversed cymbal effect or so).
I really like the guitar riffs you have down! They don''t remind me of anything I''ve already heard (which I like!)
Just thought of one more thing. Play on the high hat a little more, spice up the part a little in the sustained guitar sections, the drums sound cool but overall real boring
RM
Only three thoughts on this one:
1) It''ll really only serve as background music, the song doesn''t have a melody or repeating theme to follow, so there''s little to tie it together. Though I''d also assume thats a style of music thing as much as anything else (I don''t listen to too much Industrial stuff)
2) I don''t like the loss of the kick at 00:11. The flange is a cool effect and it fits in well, but my subwoofer was just getting warmed up and you take it away
3) The entrances at 00:16 and 00:32 can be made much more intense by stopping all sound a beat before (with maybe a reversed cymbal effect or so).
I really like the guitar riffs you have down! They don''t remind me of anything I''ve already heard (which I like!)
Just thought of one more thing. Play on the high hat a little more, spice up the part a little in the sustained guitar sections, the drums sound cool but overall real boring
RM
February 20, 2004 05:46 AM
quote: This is specific music, not very popular among music makers.
NOT TRUE!
If you join audiogang.org you will see that a huge number of composers like myself listen to and create Industrial/Metal.
Track is cool! Nice groove to it.
-schreck
www.schreckmusic.com
Sounds just like the old Command and Conquer music! I used to love that.
I think it could do with more atmosphere from the pads etc, perhaps.
What did you use to make it?
[ MSVC Fixes | STL Docs | SDL | Game AI | Sockets | C++ Faq Lite | Boost
Asking Questions | Organising code files | My stuff | Tiny XML | STLPort]
I think it could do with more atmosphere from the pads etc, perhaps.
What did you use to make it?
[ MSVC Fixes | STL Docs | SDL | Game AI | Sockets | C++ Faq Lite | Boost
Asking Questions | Organising code files | My stuff | Tiny XML | STLPort]
Thanks for the feedback. I really need it as most of people don''t know much about this type of music.
I use Psycle Modular Tracker to create my music. I think it is the most flexible application to make music as there are tons of plugins to it and it has nice, old Fasttracker style interface which I am used to.
amol.wireland.org - more industrial stuff by me
I use Psycle Modular Tracker to create my music. I think it is the most flexible application to make music as there are tons of plugins to it and it has nice, old Fasttracker style interface which I am used to.
amol.wireland.org - more industrial stuff by me
Maciej "aMoL" PawelczykThe Industrial Grinding Machine
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