i want some feedback on part of a new song im working on. The segment of the song is the first minute and a half, and i wanted some opinions on what you think before i work more. Song Thanks

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Screw it, i had to turn my server off due to really annying probems....

I would suggest getting away from the ''every 8 measures we add a new instrument for 5 minutes'' phenomena, it tends to become rather monotonous, aside from already being done to death.

Aside from that, it''s got some neat sounds in it.

Do be careful with the beat that you first bring in on the syncopation, it''s really heavy and screws up the meter perception, makes the piece a little frustrating at first.

sorry, I meant upbeats, not syncopation (it''s rather late...)

lemmee try that again... "unstressed beats". WOW! I''m really out of it.

<< i want some feedback on part of a new song im working on. >>

Cool techno, make the chords louder when they come in, then turn the bass beat down when the chords enter. An additional high melody up top would be nice.

Phil P

Yeah, actually the only thing I didn''t like about the song was the way the bass enters. It sounds all out of synch though it''s not. Also, the bass sounds like it might be a little overpowering. It''s hard to hear the chords in it.

Other than that, it sounds good so far.

Sounds good. The track has more of a "house" sound to it which doesn't match up with the hard trance intro synth. Perhaps keeping the same hard trance synth with a lower frequency cutoff might smooth out the track. Gradually bringing the cutoff up throughout the song would build the intensity. Just some suggestions ;-)

[edited by - coderx75 on February 12, 2004 3:51:44 PM]