Critique please!
Setting:
Year - 2005
Locations - Washington DC, European city, Russian City
Character Bios:
James Davis - Born July 14, 1978. Lived in Seattle, WA until he graduated from the University of Washington in 2000 when he applied for a job at the CIA. He was accepted and worked low-level jobs for over 3 years before becoming a field agent at the age of 25. Having been a field agent for 2 years now he is working his biggest case/mission to date. The stand off in Russia is very grave.
Ruslan Matichev – Born February 2, 1950. Lived in Moscow until he was 16, when he moved to Leningrad. Went into the military at a young age and has been in his whole adult life. He slowly moved up the ranks until he gained the rank of General. Stationed at a remote nuclear missile silo in Eastern Russia along with a brigade of extraordinarily loyal soldiers. He is pro-communism and has been trying to get a communist government reinstalled for the past 14 years (since the fall of communism in Russia). He has many ties with high-ranking politicians in Moscow (and in the United States). He has also gained the respect of many Spetsnaz soldiers; because of his fierce tactics and ruthless actions on the battlefield. The grave economy in Russia has left many scientists and soldiers looking for any way to get money and Mr. Matichev plans on exploiting this.
George Nikolai – Born November 19, 1946. Born in the United States to a father and mother who were Russian immigrants and moved to the United States after World War II. Mr. Nikolai lived in Washington DC all his life and got into politics after attending Yale University. He has been a member of the US Senate since he was first elected at the age of 40. Mr. Nikolai is Mr. Matichev’s contact in the US and is very sympathetic to Mr. Matichev’s ideology.
[edited by - iancheshire on May 15, 2003 1:27:59 AM]
[edited by - iancheshire on May 15, 2003 2:43:28 AM]
quote: Original post by David20321
Wasn''t this the plot of rainbow 6?
i think it''s the plot of every tom clancy book/game
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also reminds me of the plot of operation flashpoint, except moscow isnt the city being threatened in that game.
ps: european cities are not remote, i live in one
[edited by - james86 on May 15, 2003 1:40:03 AM]
ps: european cities are not remote, i live in one
[edited by - james86 on May 15, 2003 1:40:03 AM]
lol ok.
Well I guess since all we have right now is the story, all I can say is that it''s been done and you should pick a new one. With the same characters and setting if you wish, but at least make the threat original and plausible... why would a Russian want to blow up Moscow. Why don''t you have it be an American rogue general and you are a Russian; that would be original. I''ve had enough slaughtering Russians in R6 series and every other ''realism fps''
Well I guess since all we have right now is the story, all I can say is that it''s been done and you should pick a new one. With the same characters and setting if you wish, but at least make the threat original and plausible... why would a Russian want to blow up Moscow. Why don''t you have it be an American rogue general and you are a Russian; that would be original. I''ve had enough slaughtering Russians in R6 series and every other ''realism fps''
PS. Story questions go in the Game Writing forum.
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