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web site crits (yes, a different one)

Started by April 02, 2003 10:37 PM
4 comments, last by Avatar God 21 years, 7 months ago
Tell me what you think. Please, comments would really be nice. And I know it''s hard when there is no content, but still. RHS Percussion -geo
gsgraham.comSo, no, zebras are not causing hurricanes.
Okay. I have content.

NOW can I get suggestions? I''m really just curious if there is something that you don''t like, or that doesn''t work in your browser, etc, etc.

I always post these sites, but rarely get responses (but sure appreciate the ones I do get).

So if you can spare a few seconds, just tell me what you think.

r h s . p e r c u s s i o n

-George
(redeye)
gsgraham.comSo, no, zebras are not causing hurricanes.
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Using Impact font for the opening welcome statement is cool, but since you have so many words, it looks too busy. Try a different font -- something like New Times Roman and maybe even a different color. I like the the way the links are done with basic rollovers and the background picture seems appropriate. I''d just work on that opening paragraph for now, and then we can see what happens.
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it looks alright so far the general design is sound and navigation is nice and easy.

My first point would be your use of colour the saturation is way above normal levels. i would tone this down and go for a less neon look.

the backdrop wallpaper isnt big enough to fit my resolution. i would make that image either tiling so the edges fit together or make an image which is going to be big enough to fit at any resolution.

The typefont as smiley said needs some work spend some time on this and look at what other webpages use. Your first priority with text is for it to be readable, drop some of the cool and get more practical.

I think it definately has potential though.
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I understand the reason for neon. It''s mainly a color scheme to fit the topic -- since the percussion band (presumively) plays live. It kind of reminds me of Alice & Chains.

To save on space (since you seem to have the same kind of background in each box) I would like to see a window and a scroll-bar with each rollover button tagged to each link''s description in the box.
Now I shall systematicly disimboule you with a .... Click here for Project Anime
Yeah, I agree that the text is pretty hard to read. White, non-antaliased Impact on a dark box isn''t too great.

And I''ll make the bkg bigger, too. Now that you mentioned it, I can certainly see it, I guess I wasn''t paying attn before.

Oh, its supposed to be neon. These are glow in the dark sticks under black lights, a la Blue Man Group. I didn''t edit the pictures or anything, just took them straight off my camera.

Thanks for the suggestions! Probably be fixed by tomorrow.

George
gsgraham.comSo, no, zebras are not causing hurricanes.

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