Hi guys!

I've been producing quite some time now, and lately I've been very interested in videogame soundtracks and decided to give it a go myself. It's a bit retro-ish and very uplifting. I think it would go well in a very action-packed game. 

https://soundcloud.com/iiikeda/crash

Let me know what you think! 

Pretty good! I do wish you'd vary up the toms fill each time it happened. The strict repetition of that fill took me out of the element. Also I think the song could really use a good B section that had a bit more of a contrasting flavor that differs from your intro and main section. So right now it feels like the song is half done. Also as the sound is rendered out right now, it wouldn't loop very well. This is probably something you already know but just in case, try to create a seamless loop otherwise it could really take the player out of the vibe you're setting. 

Hope that helps!

Thanks, 

Nate

Nice! I would add some harmonic/melodic variation to make it more interesting...