drawn cave scene to be
https://youtu.be/To65RyXNIU8

drawn cave 2
https://youtu.be/gwpDsEmaaMI

48 minutes ago, tyree said:

drawn cave 2
https://youtu.be/gwpDsEmaaMI

I think you should use at least 1 of the 12 principles of animation.

your free to make your own 3d version with changes you think are needed

Drawn cave 2
https://youtu.be/uyJJMq_rOeg

10 hours ago, tyree said:

your free to make your own 3d version with changes you think are needed

Why would I want to do that?

You are posting in Art Critique and Feedback so prepare to get crits and feedback.

10 hours ago, tyree said:

Drawn cave 2
https://youtu.be/uyJJMq_rOeg

Your model disappears and only the smears are being rendered. Maybe you didn't notice?

Also, there are quite a few missing frames.

everything you listed as an error was intentional. initially you said use the 12 principles without stating where you want it applied. which is too general. now after stating specifically where corrections should be made. I have no problem adding in more frames. I was already going to do that for the sake of comparison. with and without the extra frames. just have not got to it yet

i could experiment with having more of the model visible with the smear. but as it is now is how it should look

Drawn cave 3
https://youtu.be/qLpDQtygPGQ

Keep up the great work!

9 hours ago, GoliathForge said:

Keep up the great work!

I think you should give details in your feedback if it's to be helpful. At least tell what you thought the best part was.

Thank you. I appreciate that. I like the obvious hint of desire and fury denial within a relationship eternal. But that's just me.