Hi.

I am quite new to this great forum. Could you help me with a game pitch? English is not my native language so I am sure what I have written is less than perfect.

If anyone could spend some time reading and eventually correcting language and/or stylistic mistakes please take a look here:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Gjqzz5SpzicCxpURLgz97KtO_3ATBFeTmEDytU3I3Do/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks a lot.

Mariusz

Mariusz, your pitch doesn't say anything about the team. You're pitching not just a game but also the team that will make it. 

I would also recommend you take a look at more examples of decks and how they're made. There is no need to copy their template, but it might show you what's missing here.