Hey there. I'm a 16 year old producer that's been trying to produce orchestrated.... songs.

I personally think this is the best theme I have made in a long time, and I wanted some feedback from fellow game devs and composers!

Thank you for listening and taking your time to click on this post.

This is great! You build well on the main motif, however I would suggest adapting it more, it will give your piece a better structure.

Also the drums to me don't add anything to the piece, maybe try just using timpani to create rhythm!