How's my design doc? I'm going to pay an artist $500 to do the art. Maybe a programmer later.

http://www.dmdware.c...Design-Doc.docx

Will add required assets later.

Never mind, not hiring

First of all i see this as a presentation document and not a design document. Theres no information on how the core mechanics work and how the game systems work you might want to work on that (In fact not might. You want.)

Second since this is seems like a presentation document tons of stuff are missing like Target Audience, why this idea is market-able/profitable the costs and the human ressources required.

Never mind, not hiring

Well okay then.