Hello!

Can you please check some sentences.
Are they make any sence?

I can make a 100% discount for you when the game is out!

The game is about the worm who flies with jetpack avoiding obstacles. (see screenshot)


I'd appreciate your help!
Thanks in advance!

Description:


Rule #17.9 of The Party Codex. Never sleep during the party!..

..Larry, the worm, is tired
on the party and decided to take a nap. However, his friends ventured an artful
joke. They tied a turbo engine to their sleeping friend and fired it up. In a
moment the worm was outside the house, flying to the great adventure through
the dark of the night. Well wish him luck!

- Control the worm to avoid incoming obstacles.
- Complete missions.
- Gain an experience to get new engines!


Here's the list of missions:


Travel 1000ft
Make a wave by jumping then diving
Crash between 400 and 600ft
Reach maximum speed (160 mph)
Pick up three bonus health
Complete the previous missions to reach level 1
Travel 500ft at maximum speed
Pick up super power
Jump 5 times in a row
Crash between 600ft and 700ft
Crash into 10 obstacles in a single run
Complete the previous missions to reach level 2
Travel 3000ft
Crash between 800ft and 850ft
Pick up three bonus helmets
Make 3 waves
Reach max speed without crashing into any obstacles
Complete the previous missions to reach level 3
Reach 2000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Crash at maximum speed
Jump 50 times in a single run
Crash into 5 valves
Dive 5 times in a row
Complete the previous missions to reach level 4
Crash into 5 hooks
Dive 50 times in a single run
Crash and stop between 500ft and 600ft
Make 5 waves
Jump over 4 obstacles in a row
Complete the previous missions to reach level 5
Reach 3000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Crash at a speed between 50mph and 60mph
Crash into 5 obstacles wearing the helmet
Dive under 4 obstacles in a row
Travel a whole day wearing the helmet
Complete the previous missions to reach level 6
Crash into three UFOs in the row
Crash and stop between 800ft and 850ft
Crash into 10 obstacles at maximum speed
Jump 50 times for the first minute of a game
Crash at a speed between 100mph and 105mph
Complete the previous missions to reach level 7
Travel for two days in a single run
Crash and stop between 1000ft and 1020ft
Crash into 15 obstacles in a single run
Cover 500ft without jumping and diving
Crash into 10 obstacles at the night time
Complete the previous missions to reach level 8
Crash into three mailboxes in the row
Crash into 5 obstacles in a row at maximum speed
Dive 30 times for the first 30 seconds of a game
Cover 600ft without jumping and diving
Pick up three super powers in a single run
Complete the previous missions to reach level 9
Reach 4000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Make 10 waves
Travel all night time at maximum speed
Crash into 8 obstacles in a row
Jump 30 times for the first 15 seconds of a game
Complete the previous missions to reach level 10
Travel 500ft in a single run.
Travel 50,000ft total.
Make 5x wave combo.
Crash into 50 obstacles total.
Crash into 100 underground obstacles total.
Crash into 500 air obstacles total.
Crash and stop exactly at 777ft.
Reach level 1
Complete all missions.
Jump 100 times in a single run.
Travel 500ft only jumping.
Dive 2 times before the first obstacle.
Travel for 5 days.
Travel 3,000ft without crashing any obstacles.
Travel 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.
Finish the game 100 times total.
Crash into 10 obstacles at the day time.
Travel less than 36ft.
Let the worm try to fire the engine 20 times.
Visit the bedroom 10 times in a row.

Some completed missions:

You traveled 500ft in a single run.
You traveled 50,000ft total.
You made 5x wave combo.
You crashed into 50 obstacles total.
You crashed into 100 underground obstacles total.
You crashed into 500 air obstacles total.
You crashed and stopped exactly at 777ft.
You reached level 1
You completed all missions.
You jumped 100 times in a single run.
You traveled 500ft only jumping.
You dived 100 times in a single run.
You dived 2 times before the first obstacle.
You traveled for 5 days.
You traveled 3,000ft without crashing any obstacles.
You traveled 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.
You finished the game 100 times total.
You crased into 10 obstacles at the day time.
You traveled less than 36ft.
You drunk a glass of martini.
The worm tried to fire the engine 20 times.
You visited the bedroom 10 times in a row.

3 jumps of 5 made
Crashed into 5 of 10 obstacles
Crashed into 4 of 5 valves
Crashed into 2 of 5 obstacles wearing the helmet
Dived under 1 of 4 obstacles
Flown 36 of 120 seconds wearing helmet
Crashed into 6 of 10 obstacles at maximum speed
Jumped 17 of 50. Time left: 12sec
Crashed into 4 of 10 obstacles at the night time
Crashed into 5 of 5 obstacles at maximum speed

thanks in advance!
my email: alex()white-zebra.com

Maybe post in help wanted and ask for 5 dollars?

Just to be clear, you want someone to go through the game and make sure all the English bits make sense in exchange for a free copy of the game?

Sounds like a sweet deal. I'd take it, but I don't think I have enough time to actually be very helpful

[color="#1c2837"]Here you go. Might need further work though, I don't fully understand the context of every mission, so you need to reread them to make sure I didn't change it the wrong way.

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..Larry the worm felt sleepy while at the party

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and decided to take a nap. While sleeping, his friends pulled a creative

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prank. They tied a turbo engine to their sleeping friend and fired it up. In a

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moment the worm was outside the house, flying on a great adventure through

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the dark of the night. We wish him luck!

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- Control the worm to avoid incoming obstacles.

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- Complete challenges.

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- Gain experience to get new engines!

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Travel 1000ft

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Make a wave by jumping then diving into water (???)

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Crash between 400ft and 600ft

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Reach maximum speed (160 mph)

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Pick up three bonus health powerups

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 1

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Travel 500ft at maximum speed

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Pick up a super power powerup

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Jump 5 times in a row

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Crash between 600ft and 700ft

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Crash into 10 obstacles in a single run

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 2

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Travel 3000ft

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Crash between 800ft and 850ft

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Pick up three bonus helmet powerups (???) OR Purchase three helmet upgrades

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Make 3 waves by crashing into water (???)

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Reach max speed without crashing into any obstacles

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 3

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Reach 2000ft without crashing into any obstacles

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Crash while at maximum speed

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Jump 50 times in a single run

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Crash into 5 valves (???)

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Dive 5 times in a row

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 4

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Crash into 5 hooks (???)

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Dive 50 times in a single run

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Crash and come to a stop between 500ft and 600ft

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Make 5 waves by diving into water (???)

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Jump over 4 obstacles in a row

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 5

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Reach 3000ft without crashing into any obstacles

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Crash while travelling between 50mph and 60mph

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Crash into 5 obstacles wearing the helmet upgrade

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Dive under 4 obstacles in a row

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Travel a whole day wearing the helmet upgrade

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 6

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Crash into three UFOs in a row OR Crash into three UFOs in a single run

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Crash and come to a stop between 800ft and 850ft

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Crash into 10 obstacles while travelling maximum speed

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Jump 50 times in the first minute of a game

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Crash at a speed between 100mph and 105mph

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 7

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Travel for two days in a single run

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Crash and come to a stop between 1000ft and 1020ft

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Crash into 15 obstacles in a single run

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Travel 500ft without jumping and diving

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Crash into 10 obstacles during the night

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 8

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Crash into three mailboxes in a row

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Crash into 5 obstacles in a row at maximum speed

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Dive 30 times during the first 30 seconds of a game

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Travel 600ft without jumping and diving

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Pick up three super power powerups in a single run

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 9

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Reach 4000ft without crashing into any obstacles

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Make 10 waves by diving into water (???)

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Travel all night at maximum speed

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Crash into 8 obstacles in a row

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Jump 30 times during the first 15 seconds of a game

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Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 10

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Travel 500ft in a single run.

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Travel 50,000ft total.

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Achieve a 5x wave combo.

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Crash into 50 obstacles total.

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Crash into 100 underground obstacles total.

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Crash into 500 air obstacles total.

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Crash and stop exactly at 777ft.

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Reach level 1

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Complete all the challenges.

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Jump 100 times in a single run.

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Travel 500ft by only jumping.

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Dive 2 times before the first obstacle.

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Travel for 5 days.

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Travel 3,000ft without crashing into any obstacles.

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Travel 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.

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Finish the game a total of 100 times.

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Crash into 10 obstacles during the day.

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Travel less than 36ft.

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Let the worm try to fire the engine 20 times.

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Visit the bedroom 10 times in a row.

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You traveled 500ft in a single run.

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You traveled 50,000ft total.

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You achieved a 5x wave combo.

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You crashed into 50 obstacles total.

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You crashed into 100 underground obstacles total.

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You crashed into 500 air obstacles total.

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You crashed and stopped exactly at 777ft.

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You reached level 1

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You completed all the challenges.

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You jumped 100 times in a single run.

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You traveled 500ft by only jumping.

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You dived 100 times in a single run.

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You dived 2 times before the first obstacle.

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You traveled for 5 days.

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You traveled 3,000ft without crashing into any obstacles.

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You traveled 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.

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You finished the game 100 times total.

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You crashed into 10 obstacles during the day.

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You traveled less than 36ft.

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You drunk a glass of martini.

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The worm tried to fire the engine 20 times.

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You visited the bedroom 10 times in a row.

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3 jumps of 5 made (??? Don't understand this)

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Crashed into 5 out of 10 obstacles

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Crashed into 4 out of 5 valves

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Crashed into 2 out of 5 obstacles while wearing the helmet

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Dived under 1 out of 4 obstacles

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Flown 36 out of 120 seconds wearing the helmet

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Crashed into 6 out of 10 obstacles while travelling at maximum speed

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Jumped 17 out of 50 times. Time left: 12sec

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Crashed into 4 out of 10 obstacles during the night

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Crashed into 5 out of 5 obstacles while travelling at maximum speed

No, just check if all words sound good for native speakers' ears. =)

Some one has checked it already, but if you find something to change, I can give a discount to you too))

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Here you go. Might need further work though, I don't fully understand the context of every mission, so you need to reread them to make sure I didn't change it the wrong way.

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Description:


Rule #17.9 of The Party Codex. Never sleep during the party!..

..Larry the worm felt sleepy while at the party and decided to take a nap. While sleeping, his friends pulled a creative
prank. They tied a turbo engine to their sleeping friend and fired it up. In a
moment the worm was outside the house, flying on a great adventure through
the dark of the night. We wish him luck!

- Control the worm to avoid incoming obstacles.
- Complete challenges.
- Gain experience to get new engines!


Here's the list of challenges:


Travel 1000ft
Make a wave by jumping then diving into water (???)
Crash between 400ft and 600ft
Reach maximum speed (160 mph)
Pick up three bonus health powerups
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 1

Travel 500ft at maximum speed
Pick up a super power powerup
Jump 5 times in a row
Crash between 600ft and 700ft
Crash into 10 obstacles in a single run
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 2

Travel 3000ft
Crash between 800ft and 850ft
Pick up three bonus helmet powerups (???) OR Purchase three helmet upgrades
Make 3 waves by crashing into water (???)
Reach max speed without crashing into any obstacles
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 3

Reach 2000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Crash while at maximum speed
Jump 50 times in a single run
Crash into 5 valves (???)
Dive 5 times in a row
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 4

Crash into 5 hooks (???)
Dive 50 times in a single run
Crash and come to a stop between 500ft and 600ft
Make 5 waves by diving into water (???)
Jump over 4 obstacles in a row
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 5

Reach 3000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Crash while travelling between 50mph and 60mph
Crash into 5 obstacles wearing the helmet upgrade
Dive under 4 obstacles in a row
Travel a whole day wearing the helmet upgrade
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 6

Crash into three UFOs in a row OR Crash into three UFOs in a single run
Crash and come to a stop between 800ft and 850ft
Crash into 10 obstacles while travelling maximum speed
Jump 50 times in the first minute of a game
Crash at a speed between 100mph and 105mph
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 7

Travel for two days in a single run
Crash and come to a stop between 1000ft and 1020ft
Crash into 15 obstacles in a single run
Travel 500ft without jumping and diving
Crash into 10 obstacles during the night
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 8

Crash into three mailboxes in a row
Crash into 5 obstacles in a row at maximum speed
Dive 30 times during the first 30 seconds of a game
Travel 600ft without jumping and diving
Pick up three super power powerups in a single run
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 9

Reach 4000ft without crashing into any obstacles
Make 10 waves by diving into water (???)
Travel all night at maximum speed
Crash into 8 obstacles in a row
Jump 30 times during the first 15 seconds of a game
Complete all the previous challenges to reach level 10

Travel 500ft in a single run.
Travel 50,000ft total.
Achieve a 5x wave combo.
Crash into 50 obstacles total.
Crash into 100 underground obstacles total.
Crash into 500 air obstacles total.
Crash and stop exactly at 777ft.
Reach level 1
Complete all the challenges.
Jump 100 times in a single run.
Travel 500ft by only jumping.
Dive 2 times before the first obstacle.
Travel for 5 days.
Travel 3,000ft without crashing into any obstacles.
Travel 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.
Finish the game a total of 100 times.
Crash into 10 obstacles during the day.
Travel less than 36ft.
Let the worm try to fire the engine 20 times.
Visit the bedroom 10 times in a row.

Some completed challenges:

You traveled 500ft in a single run.
You traveled 50,000ft total.
You achieved a 5x wave combo.
You crashed into 50 obstacles total.
You crashed into 100 underground obstacles total.
You crashed into 500 air obstacles total.
You crashed and stopped exactly at 777ft.
You reached level 1
You completed all the challenges.
You jumped 100 times in a single run.
You traveled 500ft by only jumping.
You dived 100 times in a single run.
You dived 2 times before the first obstacle.
You traveled for 5 days.
You traveled 3,000ft without crashing into any obstacles.
You traveled 5,000ft at max speed in a single run.
You finished the game 100 times total.
You crashed into 10 obstacles during the day.
You traveled less than 36ft.
You drunk a glass of martini.
The worm tried to fire the engine 20 times.
You visited the bedroom 10 times in a row.

3 jumps of 5 made (??? I don't understand this)
Crashed into 5 out of 10 obstacles
Crashed into 4 out of 5 valves
Crashed into 2 out of 5 obstacles while wearing the helmet
Dived under 1 out of 4 obstacles
Flown 36 out of 120 seconds wearing the helmet
Crashed into 6 out of 10 obstacles while travelling at maximum speed
Jumped 17 out of 50 times. Time left: 12sec
Crashed into 4 out of 10 obstacles during the night
Crashed into 5 out of 5 obstacles while travelling at maximum speed

Thanks! It helped a lot!!!

Everything is perfect unless the worm is diving into ground)))

But it's okay, texts are excelent! write me an email so I can contact you when the game is out!