I wrote some dialogue based in The Old Republic universe (BioWare's upcoming MMORPG, set after the KOTOR games) and figured I'd throw it up here to see what everyone thinks. download dialogue here It was an interesting experience, and different from other types of writing I've done before. I might not have nailed the format, but I feel like I created an interesting scenario with engaging characters. Hopefully you'll enjoy it, and if you've got any criticism please pass it along -Rich Yorick

Can you just show us the text, or attach a txt file? Docs can contain virii, I'm not going to risk it.