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Criticism Desired

Started by October 04, 2006 03:02 PM
9 comments, last by LorenzoGatti 18 years, 3 months ago
Quote: Original post by D Shankar
I wouldn't have thought the green thing is a pillow unless you actually pointed it out. It could be a little more fluffy.

In my opinion the top center region is pillow-shaped enough (but it is full of strange bumps) and the problem lies with the sides, which seem to have a very small and constant thickness (apparently as low as the sole of the sandal).
The general effect is of a strangely thick towel, maybe with something under it; you should make rounded edges with a gentle curve showing the thickness of the pillow rather than disguising it.

Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru

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