I was wondering if people could comment on what I have so far. I am not looking for website criticism, and am aware multiple links don't work which is why I am only providing two pages. http://www.gamaforge.zeroconcept.net/characters.html http://www.gamaforge.zeroconcept.net/story.html Negative and positive comments are both appreciated.

Sounds a bit like the teachings of balzacketh...

(google for it)

Couldn't find anything.