GAME STORY: Second Try

CHASIS-BLADE · 2003-11-24T14:36:17

I told you all I would try once more and here it goes. (to those who read my last attemt I have taken out a few of the flaws) OUTBREAK By Kyle Allan ‘For in there mouth there is no truth’ – Psalms 5,9 Part One: The unexpected beginning The year is 2024 and the world has changed so much so fast it is beyond God’s power to help those who need salvation from the evils that torment them. Our fate was sealed some 6 years ago when a deadly Virus wiped out the population of France and parts of Germany leaving what can only be described as ‘nothing’ no life, no noise, no animals…nothing. The rest of Europe and parts of Russia were evacuated in what was called ‘The Removal’. Over 2.7 million people were deported to either Asia or America to live in ‘Quarantine Wards’ that were specifically designed to contain evacuees or infected. Those who didn’t have any trace of infection were either sent to sheltered housing and if there was no space left they had no choice but to try and live on the streets. But to the dismay of all the virus that had now been dubbed ‘The JENI Infection’ was slowly working its way over to American and when it hit millions of lives were lost in one day and at the end of that day thousands were expiring by the second. The overload of bodies were either lying on the street or shoved into the sewer as the morgues were completely full. The next day the U.N. accepted a idea to shield the last remaining cities on earth using a new Force technology that would allow the residents to remain safe but also see to the outside world…what was left of it anyway. After three months of work the shield cities were ready to be switched on and 56 million people were selected to live in each of the 4 cities ( City 1-stretches from NY to San Francisco and also to parts of Toronto, City 2-covers nearly all of South America, City 3-is Australia and New Zealand, City 4-is Asia and parts of Russia ). Those not selected were just left on the outside that today we call ‘The Forbidden Territory’s’. Now in 2024 the outsiders have rejected the ‘Inner World’ and accepted the outside even though the Force-Fields pollution was affecting the sky (even if its not going to rain the sky is always cloudy). Also the New York Law Enforcement Agency (not the police) keep a very strict 19:00 cufew for all the inner cities residents and Exile any who break it. Yet all of this was sure to come down to something big…. Comments???

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Started by CHASIS-BLADE November 04, 2003 03:36 PM

20 comments, last by CHASIS-BLADE 21 years, 2 months ago

RichardMV

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November 19, 2003 02:06 PM

I asked you on your other story, but I thought it would be appropriate to ask here, too: Are you going to continue with this story, or are you just going to dump it?

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RichardMV

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November 24, 2003 02:36 PM

And bump number two for Chasis-Blade. Keep up the good work, good writers are so important. Seeing you do this at such a young age should be inspiring to even younger kids.

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