Hey everyone, I just found this site and this is my first post

I am desperate for critique, as i cannot improve if i don't know whats wrong and I feel as if i have tunnel vision

If you can help please do, thanks for your time.

I'm having trouble discerning what's going on around the mid-section..  It feels like the transition between chest and abdomen is not quite finished.. Yeah, otherwise I like it!  Looks pretty mean. 

thanks that's helpful