hey i have been working on my story and its characters for my game for sometime now , should i speed up or take my time on creating it.

Do you have any time limit?

i really dont

So do what you want. 

With no time limit, you can invest as much or as little time into the story as you want.

Decide if the story is important to the game, or just a quick add-on to a gameplay-centric experience, and spend as much time as you feel appropriate. The one thing I will note is that a story is not a game - at some point you do need to get on with all the other stuff (programming, art, design, etc.) that makes a game.

Hope that helps!

yo man thanks you are a real help do you want to help with the story

If you want help with the story, I'm sure you could post parts of it here for feedback and get help from lots of people.

cool can we talk over skype 

because i have some character we can work on together

ok well i am making a flagship what would you say make it epic or grand

It's YOUR story, flamingo. Make it however you want. 

If u start the story at the beginning of the game, don't make it to long, players will go away and find it boring becouse of the waiting.

Do it like Star Wars, not too long and says everything u need to know in only 30 seconds.