You have very nice compositions. I really like it, especially the Cloudy Meadow. This may sound a lot of work and if it's fine by you, I highly, highly suggest you ensure each note gets its volume, making a way smoother articulation. I also kind of find it weird between 1:19 to 1:24, it felt like I'm being hold for some notes that aren't finished.
The War is only solution, overall it's nice, as I said at first. at the end of the track 1:38 ~, it feels like you're forcing yourself to put more notes there, or it is too early to end it (removing the other instruments at 1:38), or the perc is not strong enough to build up the strings on 1:39 - 1:40. A cymbal maybe could help.
Through Forest. At first I thought you variate your piano too much, but then seems like you repeat it more than 2 times of the patterns, so I guess it's ok. I used to variate my notes too much that I don't remember the music at all, and that, in my opinion, isn't really nice. Same like Cloudy Meadow, make the articulation for the piano. It's as if you're playing a real piano. But if it's a chiptune I can't help it that's for sure. :lol: It's just the following instruments are realistic, so I'm expecting the piano to be not so flat.
I really like the entrance at 0:24 and the strings build up at 0:32, and how it gives me the chill at 0:37 to 0:55! It's so nice, that even the transition to the drums are just nice. All I really want to take on is the piano. I really, really love the choir, that 1:04 - 1:05 (and the followings like that), is just that catchy.
The composition is already nice, it can be great if you make the articulation of the piano.
Hope that helps!