My First Game Concept

Joshua Harding · 2015-02-26T22:44:30

I have just started to come up with my idea for my first game. And i would like people to give feedback to my idea. I would prefer brutal honesty, as it would let me know better what is wrong. I have finished coming up with two characters: The protagonist and the antagonist, though at this point i lack a name, sorry. -Protagonist -Personality He is introverted, so he focuses on ideas and impressions He is Sensing, so he focuses on concrete information gained from senses He is Thinking, so he tends to base decisions on logic and objective analysis of cause and effect. He is Perceptive, so he is more flexible and spontaneous. He is more probing with his activities. This means he has ISTP personality -Motivations Avenging deaths of his family -Fears Having his life stuck -Internal Conflict Should i tell my friends the truth? -External conflict Fighting the goons of the antagonist. -Strengths Sneaking, manipulating others, -Weaknesses Not strong in combat, can get discouraged and become incapable of doing anything. -How he/she speaks In a sly manipulative manner, while witty and sarcastic. -Mysteries Who killed his parents? -Secrets He actually killed his parents -History Vigilante who originally was bullied ruthlessly in school, he came home for even worse abuse by his father and mother. This caused him to become sneaky and manipulative. At the age of 17 he came across the antagonist who offered the protagonist money if he could slay the parents and then get to him through all his bodyguards. (The player doesn't know this, they will think that the antagonist killed his parents, and hes coming to kill the antagonist) -Antagonist -Personality He is introverted, so he focuses on ideas and impressions He is Intuitive, so he focuses more on the future, and looks for patterns and possibilities. He is Thinking, so he tends to base decisions on logic and objective analysis of cause and effect. He is Perceptive, so he is more flexible and spontaneous. He is more probing with his activities. This means he has INTP personality type -Motivations Saving himself -Fears dying -Internal Conflict Do i end it all or do i fight on? -External conflict Working to fight a disease -Strengths Good Leader, Funny, and strong in battle, smart. -Weaknesses He is socially inexperienced and cannot lead any personal relations without chaos -How he/she speaks Proudly, happily, and seriously. -Mysteries What caused him to do this? -Secrets He actually isn't near dead -History He had become infected with a disease and needs to fight to stay alive, there exists medication to delay the effect, but he researches how to completely eliminate the disease by kidnapping people and testing on them.