I thought it was really well done! All your sound effects are great and i thought your voices were well done too. You certainly have the heavy breathing thing down. hehe

Thank you!

I see you're actually a voice actress, so that's a pretty big deal for me if you think the voices are ok.

Hi Couchard:

Plenty of people have given you feedback on the demo reel, but I wanted to give you some specific feedback about your website seeing as I'm an online marketing consultant. One of the biggest mistakes that people make when selling their services online is not being deliberate with their website's layout/design. More specifically, you should look at every page of the site and ask yourself the following question:

What action do I want people to take?

If you don't have an answer for every page, you need one. If you have an answer, you need to make sure that page is built to get people to take that action as soon as possible. At a glance, a first-time visitor should know what they should do on the page and what happens next. Landed on the main homepage? Listen to my demo reel! Done listening? Request a quote for your next game project! One step should always lead to the next. You need to hold peoples hands so they stay focused and know what to do next.

While you have the "Contact Me" action as a possibility, you should be even more specific - Are you asking for fan mail, questions, or feedback? Who do you want contacting you, and why? Tell them, so you're putting the right message out there about who YOU want to talk to and a strong message to your visitors about whether or not they're in the right place. If I'm a game developer, an invitation to tell you about my new game project via a form on your website that has specific questions about the project would tell me that I'm in the right place. So would an invitation to schedule a 30-minute Skype call to outline the audio needs for an upcoming game.

Those are the biggest pieces of advice I have for your new website - you have a great demo reel, and you want to do everything you can to make sure it's working for you!

-Dan Hulsman

@VGMAcademy

Hi!

Thank you, that's great advices. I suck at marketing so it's nice to have advices by pros.

I was planning on a big update for my website because I got lazy with it and I got a few new cool projects so I'll use your advices when I do that.

Thanks again!

Dan,

What great advice! I think i'll apply that to my website as well.