Apologies for the previous post. Anyway here's the full story: Story begins 15 years ago in a hospital, where a man is confronted by a tough looking youth who promises him he will save his son, James Phillips from a fatal disease. Present time > JP is a stock broker working in a large trade centre, while recovering from the recent death of his father. A terrorist attack is carried out onto the centre. JP manages to hide in a small private office and lock himself in. While there, he is confronted by a strange man, Everto, who tells JP that he is a fellow worker. They manage to sneak several floors down, picking up weapons from the fallen security guards. Everto becomes lost on the ground floor, while JP suffers a horrific 'hallucination' of being attacked by a demon. Two weeks later> JP is at home, still thinking of the hallucination. He hears strange noises, and creates conversations in his mind. One of them shows his father talking to an unknown stranger by phone, telling him that he agrees. One night, JP wakes up to find Everto sitting beside him. Everto tells JP of his ability to move between two worlds, our and a horrific demonised world co-existing with our own in a different dimension. JP is then transported back to the hellish world, where he is confronted by various demons and zombies. He makes his way around the city, which too exists in the hellish world. After suffering several severe injuries throughout his battles, he is transported back to his bedroom, with Everto laughing at his state. He congratulates JP on his accomplishment, and tells JP that he is looking for an employee with just such capabilities of survival. He tells JP of his encounter with his father, and how he saved JP from the disease. When asked who he is, Everto does not reply, but remains constant on the topic of 'employment'. JP agrees to the deal, and again asks Everto who he is. Everto tells JP that he is a somewhat ruler, a leader of Another world. The story ends with Everto's laughter at JP. [Edited by - Lnnskay on August 29, 2009 6:28:31 AM]

What sort of gameplay do you envision for your story? FPS? Action-adventure?

Thanks for feedback. A third person shooter. The Suffering served as inspiration.

You have a sketch of a setting, but not really a story. What is the actual story? Why do I care about the characters?