Wrote a song lookin for comments
I have never writen a song in my life, but i hear heartache gives you insperation so i went for it... i wrote it fast and i dont know if its good but i was looking for comments on wether i should just give up on trying or if i should continue to rework it.. thank you
When it all began we were just playing games
That’s the first time the sparks flew
Christmas came, we became one in the same
And ever since then are love grew
As we got older are bodies changed
The night we first made love was paradise
Learning all your secrets was a little strange
Now knowing who you are, I wont think twice
(chorus)
There’s nothing in this world that I can do
Your everything I want, yah you know its true
I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too
It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you
You went to college and things were good
Are love was never meant to die
But then you did something I though you never would
And all I could do is lay in bed and cry
It hurt us both about just as much
We were wondering if we could last
Although both hurting we got in touch
Our first test of true love we had passed
(chorus)
There’s nothing in this world that I can do
Your everything I want, yah you know its true
I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too
It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you
This past summer things got real tough
I was praying that it wasn’t to late
You got fed up and had enough
That very day I lost my soul mate
Everyday I think about what went wrong
There was no goodbye, are we even friends?
Everything started out so strong
A promising love now all depends
(Chorus)
There’s nothing in this world that I can do
Your everything I want, yah you know its true
I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too
It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you
I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too
It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you
Where is the song? All I see are the lyrics. If you can post the song, I'll listen to it and give you my feedback.
Thanks!
Thanks!
Nathan Madsen
Nate (AT) MadsenStudios (DOT) Com
Composer-Sound Designer
Madsen Studios
Austin, TX
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