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Wrote a song lookin for comments

Started by August 29, 2006 04:09 PM
0 comments, last by nsmadsen 18 years, 2 months ago
I have never writen a song in my life, but i hear heartache gives you insperation so i went for it... i wrote it fast and i dont know if its good but i was looking for comments on wether i should just give up on trying or if i should continue to rework it.. thank you When it all began we were just playing games That’s the first time the sparks flew Christmas came, we became one in the same And ever since then are love grew As we got older are bodies changed The night we first made love was paradise Learning all your secrets was a little strange Now knowing who you are, I wont think twice (chorus) There’s nothing in this world that I can do Your everything I want, yah you know its true I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you You went to college and things were good Are love was never meant to die But then you did something I though you never would And all I could do is lay in bed and cry It hurt us both about just as much We were wondering if we could last Although both hurting we got in touch Our first test of true love we had passed (chorus) There’s nothing in this world that I can do Your everything I want, yah you know its true I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you This past summer things got real tough I was praying that it wasn’t to late You got fed up and had enough That very day I lost my soul mate Everyday I think about what went wrong There was no goodbye, are we even friends? Everything started out so strong A promising love now all depends (Chorus) There’s nothing in this world that I can do Your everything I want, yah you know its true I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you I think that when you’re alone, you feel it too It’s impossible for me to deny my love for you
Where is the song? All I see are the lyrics. If you can post the song, I'll listen to it and give you my feedback.

Thanks!

Nathan Madsen
Nate (AT) MadsenStudios (DOT) Com
Composer-Sound Designer
Madsen Studios
Austin, TX

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