I am a twenty two year old writer looking for feedback on two projects. I am in the works in turning them into comics, but I also would love to make a game. However my programming skills are that of a brainless chimp on crack. Anyways I digress...I would like anyone who is willing to take a look at these stories, and critique them honestly. Rip it to shreds, or send your kudos I just want feedback. They both can be found at www.fanfiction.net under the pen name Tony Kaos. The one completed story "The Legend of Chaos" is finished, but only has a few pages posted on the site. The other one "The Eternal Saga" is still in progress, but should be done hopefully within two weeks. I look forward to hearing from you, and thanks for your time.