The Storyline Plot The World of 2016 Holds its Breath. What Could have happend if Al Gore had won the election in 2000, what if he did win? how would the Republican party win the elections in the year 2016,2018? Should have the united state have a another new Ronald Reagan President? in that year? What if the united state army formed a new Elite Special Forces team to combat the terror states that supports terrorists and What could have happend to The Un? Some Ex-Military members who fought. In the wars of The Cold War & Gulf War 91 also the the Balkan wars have created a new un know has United International Alliance, There plans are cleary to remove the recent terror threats around the world. Meanwhile in Florida Media shows reports of some terror camps near long beach area,also the media shows some reports of some air terror drones been fired in new york city,even same reports in the west coast area. At the United Nations the un sec general calls on these terror groups to a ceasefire, meanwhile the United International Alliance called the new President in the white house to do something about these terror camps in the usa. The President on the phone said i will send my army task force (Elite Special Forces) he also said the United International Alliance must send there own forces to combat these terror group. 3 Days Passed A early victory for the (Elite Special Forces) they have destroyed the terror camps in Florida and also found some shocking Documents and cds that these terror groups are supported and are from the MELA The Documents also show that iran wants a Alliance with north korea. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ That is just a small sneak peek story i will write more on the story later this year. Theme of The Game WW3 or WW4 The Factions USA/Elite Special Forces UIAF: 5 Nations MELA (The Middle East Libration Army) Insurgent Rebels Old Art Concept http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/469/picture002ya2.jpg Old Idea Concept This game Genre will be a mixed with a rts/fps fit to it. So Tell me what do you think of the Concept More to come. [Edited by - TotalGamer on July 18, 2006 4:13:28 AM]

You're lucky I'm a nice guy, TotalGamer. I'll just leave it at that.

To the feedback: The storyline feels... uncertain. You lay down a bunch of events, little bit of history, certain results, and in doing so you've painted an initial scene of looming global disaster. The problem I immediately see with all this is that despite all the information you've given, there are a ton of things--important things, mind you--that have been left out. For example: what are all the other heavy-hitters--such as China, India and Russia--doing about all this? What's happened to them in the past ten years, and what are their plans for the future?

To return to my starting point, it seems like you're not quite certain what you want to do or have happen with this game. You mention that this'll be an RTS/FPS game, but in what way will that aspect be made available to the player? Meaning, what role does the player play in all of this, and what affect will their actions have on the world? In other words, you've got an interesting start for a story, but as far as making it into a game, you're gonna have to be more specific.

Give more details. Expand the story and history of each major country. Give a timeline of everything that's happened across the globe. "Define, define, define." Basically, tell the story first, then make the game. You'll have a much easier time getting started on this project with a firmer foundation to work from.

There needs to be more killing and definitely more boobs in this story.

But more than that: What does the game play like?