If your not to busy do you think you look over my game design document and email or post a review of it, like how i can better it for the 7th version before i send it out to my team. I need to go to work in like 3 hours so post here if you interested I'll send it to you through email and if more people want to reivew it while I'm at work they could you could send it to them. The file is less then a 1 mb, and it's in pdf format. My email is zike22@aol.com So far for my own review somethings i though would be good are. - A title page - A whole lot more pictures - An index - A glossory - Table of contents - Breaking it up into chapters - More color - Samples of the actual work into the dsd Feel free to comment on what ever you want, be it posotive or negative, thanks.

I'm pretty busy, but I'll review your grammar. It should be "You're" and "too" in the thread title.

Just post the document here if you want feedback, or drop it on your blog.

Classic.