I've made another tune based off of comments that I got from the first thread. Let me know if it sounds better. Also, what do you think of the tune? Sample 2 Thanks guys.

I like it...very gamey, but sometimes gamey and cute is good.

There's a lot of deep resonance on your kick drums, could be trimmed back some, I have a hard time hearing the kick drum kicks because my subwoofer is still rattling from the first one. Tighten up the bass on your bass drum and let your string bass instrument come out a little more.

LOL Way better! The mixing is better, the sounds are cleaner and its much more engaging and interesting to listen to because there is a lot more coherence. Now on the musical front, I would recommend that you start implementing some chord changes to give variation to you idea and to make it last longer. :)

Very good!

The above post was mine. :)

Rain,

Oh ok. I thought I had a fan following the beginning of my career or something.
:)

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Rain,

Oh ok. I thought I had a fan following the beginning of my career or something.
:)

Nope just trying to be nice and helpful. :)