hi guys, back again :D.. need comments on my new composition Illusion 1214.. thx..plz gimme ur critics and comments http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/tingsihaomusic.htm [Edited by - FlamingBoi on May 5, 2005 2:42:29 AM]

no one?..

I am lisening to it right now. I will let you know

EDIT: I think it is really cool ANd I would love to play a game with that music in it(as long as the game play is cool too)

are you selling these ar just making them for your own game Or can I use them in mine?

these are not specially made for any game soundtracks but the intended genre was for a peaceful game soundtrack ;).. you can use it if you want, as long as you gimme some credits .. :)..

We fight together- The latter parts of it were very melodic and nice. I didn't like the drum pattern at all.

Dawn of the battle- the beginning was strong but there's a lot of volume issues

VERY nice. Quite meldodic and well orchestrated. Too bad they sometimes fall short of their intended goal. The battle theme is not "urgent" enough, it doesn't make the adrenalyne pump, in my opinion. But you only have MY opinion for that...

Thx for your feedbacks, i will definetely improve the next time :D..
anymore critics/comments? :D..

Hey,

On Illusion,
Quite like the start, but have you tried maybe mandolin or something instead of harp from 0:00 to 0:39?
The melody that's held by the flute is really really well done.
At around 1:00, I'm not so much a fan of the violin? that comes in, particularly the second half. Maybe I'd put in some rhetoric against the first bit.
Perhaps make the fade out/fade in a slightly shorter break.
Second violin is much better than the first, and works as a nice countermelody.
Also, the song could quite easily finish on the pause at 3:14 [if you altered the base chord a little]. The fade out is a little bit unexpected, to me at least.

All that said, it really did take some listening and picking to even come up with those pointers, and they're just personal opinion, and very literally _everything_ that I could find in the piece that I'd consider tweaking. The music itself is excellent, I'm currently getting the rest of your music to check out on a better sound system than the one I'm on now.

Also, with the comment about the violin at 1:00, slightly tweaking even the expression of the sound may make it sound better. I'm not sure what hardware/software you used to make it, but if possible, I'd try to have a bit of a play around with the violin at 1:00.

My two cents,
CJM

Quote: Original post by CJM
Hey,

On Illusion,
Quite like the start, but have you tried maybe mandolin or something instead of harp from 0:00 to 0:39?
The melody that's held by the flute is really really well done.
At around 1:00, I'm not so much a fan of the violin? that comes in, particularly the second half. Maybe I'd put in some rhetoric against the first bit.
Perhaps make the fade out/fade in a slightly shorter break.
Second violin is much better than the first, and works as a nice countermelody.
Also, the song could quite easily finish on the pause at 3:14 [if you altered the base chord a little]. The fade out is a little bit unexpected, to me at least.

All that said, it really did take some listening and picking to even come up with those pointers, and they're just personal opinion, and very literally _everything_ that I could find in the piece that I'd consider tweaking. The music itself is excellent, I'm currently getting the rest of your music to check out on a better sound system than the one I'm on now.

Also, with the comment about the violin at 1:00, slightly tweaking even the expression of the sound may make it sound better. I'm not sure what hardware/software you used to make it, but if possible, I'd try to have a bit of a play around with the violin at 1:00.

My two cents,
CJM

sadly i don have a madolin sample.. but i'll try other ther things..
thx for ur critics :D..