hi guys.. need feedback for a few songs here :D.. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/tingsihaomusic.htm just uploaded them, please give c&c on all ;)..

"This song hasn't been cleared yet. Please check back tomorrow."

I'll come back and give 'em a listen when they're accessible.

I need to sign up to hear it =(

Upload it onto a normal sever and I will let you know what I think.

so soryy.. it has been cleared :).. plz check again :D.. u don need to sign up.. just click low-fi or high-fi .. don click mp3 :)..

Sorry, still doesn't want to work... seems it doesn't like my computer (albeit this is my old, horribly unstable compy (normal one is busted)). AS jeffie7 said, put it on a normal server and we'll comment.

First off, you have some technical problems that need to be resolved, such as sudden volume drops, clicks, and distortion. Listening past those, however, you've got some nice, oriental sounding melodies with simple, but effective harmonies. There are some rough transitions and the samples are really short, but with a little work, you could have some pretty good songs. They're a bit overly cheery for my taste, but that's just me. If you really like cheery, and want to appeal to a broader taste, try a little contrast to better frame the mood you're trying to present. That's my advice, anyway. Take it or leave it as you see fit.

I also picked up on the random problems with vol drops and such.
Another thing is one of the songs had drums How did you play them? try keeping them simple.

The volume issue is definately something that needs to be fixed. Some of the instruments seem too digital for an orchestra in the last clip. Not a musician so not sure what it is actually called. Overall, I like the theme.

yea.. i know.. lotsa technical problems.. btw.. im just using like free soundfonts.. so i can't expect good sound from it ;)..
i uploaded new songs.. can u guys c&c on the songs specifically?.. :D...

2 new songs are :
let's go
light of darkness

[Edited by - FlamingBoi on January 14, 2005 10:09:56 PM]

I still can't listen to your songs, but I felt the need to comment on your remark:

Quote: Originally posted by FlamingBoi
im just using like free soundfonts.. so i can't expect good sound from it

While it's true that you can expect better quality from commercially aquired samples (or your own recorded samples if you have the equipment), you should still be taking the effort to make pieces using free samples sound good - you can do some very high-quality work without paying a cent if you make good use of what's available.