Hi. I'm new here and I just want to be able to get some feedback on this and future projects. Anyway, this is a song based off a short story I've written a while ago. Areas I need to improve on would be (mostly) timing, which is a bit off during the beginning parts of the song. The clock SFX has something to do with what's happening at the scene during the time it's played and it's suppose to give off somewhat of a "running out of time" feel in places. The theme is suppose to be like some type of mysterious Marry go Round. Please respond and give feedback/a critique. Hope you like. BTW, since I'm not really sure how to post links I'm gonna just put up the URL so you can copy and paste it into the address. http://kosuke.affordable-anime.co.uk/Merry%20'Round%20The%20Clock.mp3

I certainly enjoyed it. It definately reminded me of a carnival like atmosphere with a merry go round.

Do you have any other samples? Many people seem to do very short sound stuff, so it was nice to hear a longer song.

Regards,
Dr. A>