I''d have to agree with Forcas. Read up a little on at least some basic music theory.
Another helpful thing is to really study the work of artists you enjoy listening to. Really listen to what all the different parts are doing to make up the song.

BTW..Pay no attention to anonymous,he''s obviously some talentless idiot trying to put down people that do what he wishes he could do.

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static music

if your into polychord compositions then your music was great, unfortunately the main stream public isn''t realy into that.

my recomendation would be to slow some of the music down, get away from 120bpm, relax on the drum part a little bit and seperate the melody from the counter meleody and harmony/choards.

ok, thats all i have to say, and remember not to take critisisim to hard.

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