[WIP] theme for rpg
The theme
well... wacha think? crits please
this is just a theme, the finished one will be rendered by as a DirectMusicProducer story.
Story? I don't think there's such a DirectMusic format.
EDIT: The download finally finished. I was only getting 2k a second. All in all, it's a very good song! I love the melody and the general feeling that the song provides.
Some critisisms: I'd recommend not using the same chord progression throughout the entire song. It makes it feel like it's sort of dragging along without direction. Vary it up a little. Also, your harmony seems like it's repeating over and over... and over. Repetition can be good, but there should probably be at least a little bit more variety in there.
[edited by - Matt Calabrese on October 18, 2002 8:02:59 PM]
EDIT: The download finally finished. I was only getting 2k a second. All in all, it's a very good song! I love the melody and the general feeling that the song provides.
Some critisisms: I'd recommend not using the same chord progression throughout the entire song. It makes it feel like it's sort of dragging along without direction. Vary it up a little. Also, your harmony seems like it's repeating over and over... and over. Repetition can be good, but there should probably be at least a little bit more variety in there.
[edited by - Matt Calabrese on October 18, 2002 8:02:59 PM]
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